There's so much philosophy in here. You italicized a-lot of it, and hid the best work in the depths, or I suppose, fog, of the work. This feels like it could take a career to unpack... Your sentences run, I think of Herman Melville, but are compressed; is he an influence of yours If you don't mind saying? I think you are finding your voice, and I can honestly say that I have not heard similar before. Awe inspiring work Barnes.
Hi Mark! Thank you for the close read! And yes, Melville is a long time mentor of mine. What a great catch! I am flattered by your praise, and I will keep searching for my voice, I often get lost in the works of greater men, and it can take me a while to come down from their heights. Thank you so much for supporting my work and taking time to leave thoughtful comments, they mean alot to me.
There's so much philosophy in here. You italicized a-lot of it, and hid the best work in the depths, or I suppose, fog, of the work. This feels like it could take a career to unpack... Your sentences run, I think of Herman Melville, but are compressed; is he an influence of yours If you don't mind saying? I think you are finding your voice, and I can honestly say that I have not heard similar before. Awe inspiring work Barnes.
Hi Mark! Thank you for the close read! And yes, Melville is a long time mentor of mine. What a great catch! I am flattered by your praise, and I will keep searching for my voice, I often get lost in the works of greater men, and it can take me a while to come down from their heights. Thank you so much for supporting my work and taking time to leave thoughtful comments, they mean alot to me.